Fool

Fate of the deepest love
Trumped by choice
Love foolishly dismissed



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6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. dustus
    Jul 08, 2010 @ 17:20:11

    excellent writing in few syllables. choice trumps fate implying a game of chance. cheers

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  2. buttercup600
    Jul 08, 2010 @ 18:41:03

    Few words but making SUCH an impact!! Loved it 🙂

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  3. slpmartin
    Jul 08, 2010 @ 23:41:13

    It was in one of Paul Thorn’s songs that the lyric says “Everyone kisses the right person goodbye’…seems to be a universal problem with romance…enjoyed the poem.

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    • ziibi
      Jul 09, 2010 @ 05:33:34

      The hopeless romantic in me screams no but you’re right it is a universal denial of love. I wonder if fear backs that decision.

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  4. Jingle
    Jul 14, 2010 @ 13:44:12

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/14/outstanding-poetry-communities-to-share/

    check out a post about poetry communities,
    have fun exploring…
    Cheers!

    Reply

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