Time Stands Still

* For Magpie Tales ~ Mag 32

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25 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. gautami tripathy
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:07:26

    Yes, it sure does.

    😉

    timeless flies search for fries

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  2. ninotaziz
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:23:22

    A kiss stops time.

    Don’t we know it! Time I stop blogging and go upstairs.

    Thanks River!

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  3. Kathe W.
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:26:57

    yes! A kiss does stop time! Nice Magpie.

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  4. David
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:44:34

    A kiss can last forever.

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  5. Leo (Leonnyes)
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 12:10:12

    “your lips touch mine
    a kiss stops time”

    oh so romantic, and beautifully written..

    My Mag

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  6. slpmartin
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 12:36:01

    Wow…what a passionate poem with such beautiful lines….it’s one that is breath taking.

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  7. SenderUpWords
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 12:42:35

    Love. I need one of those kisses again. Alas, life ain’t presenting it. Great Magpie. Love and Light, Sender

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  8. Crystal Jigsaw
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 13:23:04

    It certainly does stop time; perhaps a kiss should last longer.

    CJ xx

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  9. River
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 13:46:55

    Thank you for all your kind words. 🙂

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  10. buttercup600
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 19:19:33

    Hmmm River, don’t we all want to have that passion always? So beautiful penned dear friend! Much love and hugs xxx

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  11. Tumblewords
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 20:20:49

    Yes, I’m sure it does~ 🙂

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  12. Rene Foran
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 20:33:46

    Uh-huh 🙂

    Rene

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  13. Teresa
    Sep 16, 2010 @ 21:37:44

    Wonderful! I love the part about it stopping mid flow. Nicely done.
    Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/16/magpie-32/

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  14. Priyanka
    Sep 17, 2010 @ 06:56:21

    wow lovely ending 😀

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  15. willow
    Sep 17, 2010 @ 07:37:26

    Aromatic and lovely!

    Reply

  16. kathi harris
    Sep 17, 2010 @ 23:53:04

    That is soooooooo true. The right kiss does stop time.

    Reply

  17. brian
    Sep 18, 2010 @ 04:45:31

    that would be some kiss…smiles…but i know exactly what you are saying…ad love the pairing of passion and jasmine…nice mag!

    Reply

  18. Lydia
    Sep 19, 2010 @ 03:06:07

    If all had such kisses the same day there would be world peace!

    Reply

  19. Fireblossom
    Sep 19, 2010 @ 10:30:05

    Time has no chance against the right kiss….

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  20. Jingle
    Sep 19, 2010 @ 19:20:43

    excellent!

    Reply

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    Oct 06, 2010 @ 08:59:53

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  22. windybound
    Oct 07, 2010 @ 02:27:11

    I love this.

    Reply

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