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Time Stands Still
16 Sep 2010 25 Comments
in Love, poetry Tags: love, magpie tales, poem, poetry, River Urke, time
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Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:07:26
Yes, it sure does.
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Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:23:22
A kiss stops time.
Don’t we know it! Time I stop blogging and go upstairs.
Thanks River!
Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:26:57
yes! A kiss does stop time! Nice Magpie.
Sep 16, 2010 @ 11:44:34
A kiss can last forever.
Sep 16, 2010 @ 12:10:12
“your lips touch mine
a kiss stops time”
oh so romantic, and beautifully written..
My Mag
Sep 16, 2010 @ 12:36:01
Wow…what a passionate poem with such beautiful lines….it’s one that is breath taking.
Sep 16, 2010 @ 13:46:05
Thank you Charlie. It came from the hopeless romantic that waits for one to take her breath away.
Sep 16, 2010 @ 12:42:35
Love. I need one of those kisses again. Alas, life ain’t presenting it. Great Magpie. Love and Light, Sender
Sep 16, 2010 @ 13:44:10
I too..
Sep 16, 2010 @ 13:23:04
It certainly does stop time; perhaps a kiss should last longer.
CJ xx
Sep 16, 2010 @ 13:40:07
I wonder what life would be if we all had a kiss of such passion daily or even weekly.
Sep 16, 2010 @ 13:46:55
Thank you for all your kind words. 🙂
Sep 16, 2010 @ 19:19:33
Hmmm River, don’t we all want to have that passion always? So beautiful penned dear friend! Much love and hugs xxx
Sep 16, 2010 @ 20:20:49
Yes, I’m sure it does~ 🙂
Sep 16, 2010 @ 20:33:46
Uh-huh 🙂
Rene
Sep 16, 2010 @ 21:37:44
Wonderful! I love the part about it stopping mid flow. Nicely done.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/16/magpie-32/
Sep 17, 2010 @ 06:56:21
wow lovely ending 😀
Sep 17, 2010 @ 07:37:26
Aromatic and lovely!
Sep 17, 2010 @ 23:53:04
That is soooooooo true. The right kiss does stop time.
Sep 18, 2010 @ 04:45:31
that would be some kiss…smiles…but i know exactly what you are saying…ad love the pairing of passion and jasmine…nice mag!
Sep 19, 2010 @ 03:06:07
If all had such kisses the same day there would be world peace!
Sep 19, 2010 @ 10:30:05
Time has no chance against the right kiss….
Sep 19, 2010 @ 19:20:43
excellent!
Oct 06, 2010 @ 08:59:53
Cool blog, I hadn’t come across adventuresinpoesy.wordpress.com earlier in my searches!
Continue the good work!
Oct 07, 2010 @ 02:27:11
I love this.