That song I love is ours.
Can I have it back?
or Is it lost to me like you?

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. slpmartin
    Oct 07, 2010 @ 09:34:30

    Short but loaded with emotions…well done River.


  2. Jingle
    Oct 07, 2010 @ 13:56:25

    compact yet brilliant words.


  3. Punam
    Oct 07, 2010 @ 14:29:48

    Nice. Short and crisp. But very very realistic. I do feel like that too.. ~Punam


  4. buttercup600
    Oct 07, 2010 @ 22:04:23

    Sweetheart, so much in these words 🙂 I felt the pain…awesome write xxxxx


  5. trisha
    Oct 16, 2010 @ 07:08:29

    so much said in so little words.


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