The Dream~

I wake with a poetic verse
Lingering from a dream
Balancing on the edge
Of unconsciousness
A fading thought
Slipping away
To no avail
Like you
and I

2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. slpmartin
    Jun 26, 2010 @ 13:20:02

    Very nice shape poem and content…well done.


  2. Thomas Feliciano
    Jul 07, 2010 @ 14:02:59

    I like this poem quite a bit. Nice work.


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