ziibi~ July 5- The full Moon rises to the East

The full Moon rises to the East

She dances under the Birch
To the music of her soul
Bare feet against wet Earth
Freer then she has ever known

She dances a healing dance
To cleanse the invisible wounds
Buried through generations
Deep within the soul

She dances for all women
Young, weak, strong and old
Women across waters and land
Throughout all of time

She dances secret knowledge
Beats of movement and song
Mothers have taught to Daughters
Since the days of Avalon

She dances under the full Moon
Encircled by the magic
As they have for Centuries
And will forever more

River 7/10

The revised poem from June 28th.

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17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. buttercup600
    Jul 05, 2010 @ 19:38:34

    Vivid imagination so nicely expressed..Loved it 🙂

    Reply

  2. Jingle
    Jul 05, 2010 @ 21:16:36

    what beautiful dances,
    loved the warmth of words
    and uplifting spirits.
    😉

    Reply

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  4. Jingle
    Jul 05, 2010 @ 21:17:48

    I linked you in,

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/30/thursday-poets-rally-week-24-july-1-7-2010/

    please feel free to visit and comment for a minimum 18 poets from the participants list,
    let me know after you are done!
    😉

    Reply

  5. slpmartin
    Jul 05, 2010 @ 23:30:53

    Just a gorgeous poem…I could see the dancing and feel the night air…very well crafted poem.

    Reply

  6. Imagina
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 02:35:03

    loove this poem, very liberating & feminine! women are dancers in life 🙂

    Reply

  7. springcreekriverocean
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 06:28:02

    Secrets told in rhyme stay secrets for all time

    Reply

  8. libravirgo923
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 14:26:18

    The secret dance taught from mother to daughter – true of so many things in life. Lovely

    Reply

  9. oinky
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 21:05:43

    lovely writing and very entertaining 🙂

    Reply

  10. Ruhig
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 22:36:05

    The perfect partners as the Moon does hold a certain sway that makes all the world flow. I also suggest dancing in the rain every chance you get!

    Reply

  11. arcanewhisper
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 22:41:18

    Love this poem, it’s so feminine and elegant!

    Reply

  12. Jingle
    Jul 07, 2010 @ 09:37:19

    your poem is represented now as promised,
    Happy Wednesday!
    😉

    Reply

  13. williewizzy
    Jul 07, 2010 @ 19:41:20

    Rich imagination expressed in poem 🙂

    Reply

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  15. hoiden
    Jul 07, 2010 @ 21:19:27

    so feminine and enjoyable…wonderful

    Reply

  16. Jingle
    Jul 11, 2010 @ 14:57:40

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/11/happy-belated-birthday-plus-get-well-soon-wishes-4-five-friends/

    please help visit 5 people,
    wishing them Happy Belated Birthday or Get Well Soon.
    Thank you in advance!
    cheers!

    Reply

  17. psychopoettess
    Jul 12, 2010 @ 22:33:54

    put me in the moment, lovely

    Reply

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